Tightrope tension
coupled
with words dealt
with abandon
like playing cards
rending flesh
slice!
bleeds to outcomes
unanticipated
and dear ones
injured
and feeling hurt.
*Art by Jennifer Reed Go Here For More...it's quite good,actually
Stak
29 September 2007
Loose Lips.........poetry train car number whatever......hey y'all, i'm writing again!.......
Tightrope tension
coupled
with words dealt
with abandon
like playing cards
rending flesh
slice!
bleeds to outcomes
unanticipated
and dear ones
injured
and feeling hurt.
*Art by Jennifer Reed Go Here For More...it's quite good,actually
Stak
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Very cool art, Stak. And the words, too.
I'll refrain from pointing out that Poetry Train day is Monday...
i know i know........but i had to spit it out.........so there it is........not my best......but i'm working a 12 hour shift monday......and imma be intoxicated tomorrow and watching the footballs.........
ya weenie - you're supposed to sign on so everyone knows to visit!
i know how this one feels - and i love the art.
Whatever it is, it seems to hurt as hell!!Physically and emmotionnaly
I felt that tightrope tension! Powerfully so!
it makes me wonder if perhaps the new found penchant for physical "cutting" is not being carried out by people who no not the power of the most vivid form of bloodletting... the spoken (often screamed at the top of your lungs) word.......
excellent....
You're right. Those closest to us know how to cut the deepest.
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