The boys at the precinct will never believe
This one
They'll think i'm a loon
Thought Sgt. Goose
Tables turned
The murder scene
The sheer madness of it all
The Wolf(aka Big Bad)lay disemboweled
Trees garnished with his guts
The one section twisted as
Though used for a jump rope
The blood used as paint
Tinting tree bark with images of garnet daisies
Thoughtlessly or brazenly
The evidence left conspicuously clutched in
The right paw of Big Bad
The Little Red Riding Hood
Rock it like the underdog........win anyway!........
Stak
7 comments:
Stak, that's twisted, sick, and utterly perfect!
Btw, that whole thing on my blog? It's REAL, dude. Disney's not letting metal bands play at House of Blues, when the House of Blues is located on property that Disney owns.
I'll post more about this for my Thursday Thirteen. Come on back and be as revolted as I am!
Go Red!
Great twist on the story... just in time for Halloween...
AKA Big Bad... loved that.
Stak-babe, you so my hero. Even though i'm usually cheering the Wolfie on - in this case Red taking no prisoners... i'm loving that she kicks ass. Fabulous!
I worship you, man.
Rock like you're a creative genius.
your ever humble servant - rhi
Awesome twist! Go Red!
'Carnage on Candyland Ave.' LOVE your title. Then the graphic becomes a little eerie. And then the poem blows a brain gasket. Really enjoyed your Halloween ride on the Poetry Train, Stak.
i'm surprised no one cued in the "they'll think i'm a loon" line........being the guy's name is Sgt. Goose.........thanks y'all........
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