15 October 2007

TWILIGHT BLEEDS.........poetry train car number who knows........



Edges give way
leaking dark into the light
slowly,surely
it's invaded
enmeshed
and blended
transformed and remade
a new creature
exactly what i intend to do to you.


Stak

12 comments:

Rhian said...

gulp. runs screaming into the night.....

Anonymous said...

Scary stuff, but I am lovin' it!

Lisa Andel said...

I do so love the dark side.

STAK said...

dark is good,no?...........

R.G. ALEXANDER said...

That last line was awesome! Gave me chills-and a few ways you can read it too. Just great!

Anonymous said...

Superbly visual and creepy! Love it!

Rhian said...

heh - so Stak-babe, you thought the guys on Nancy's dance post were hot, huh?

STAK said...

wasn't looking at the guys,chica.......

Anonymous said...

Glad you liked the dancers...

I like the poem. Dark and creepy. Actually, the more I read the more I wish I wrote if for the dancers. Hmmm...another new way to look at them.

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

This is the sort of thing Linkin Park wishes they could write. Beautifully done, Stak!!!

Unknown said...

Hey, I don't have your contact info, and I don't know what our music writer does with her dang address files, but we're trying to get an invitation to the band for the Metro's Best party on Wed., Oct. 24. Can you gimmie a fax or snail mail address where I can send it? Or, preferably, BOTH?

Thanks, babe!

STAK said...

hey stacey...i'll get that info to ya via your e-mail........

to everyone else.....i gotta thank you all for the kind words........i thought the body of this piece was pretty elementary.......any one of you could've written a similar set of words.........

but yeah...........the last line brings the menace,don't it........