04 July 2007
STAK AND TRIXIE.............poetique.............
First line stak: Lovelorn,forlorn British bitten goathead shearshorn
Line two Trixie: Hospice, forgotten, a piece torn for friendship born
Third line stak: Bread broken, carriage upturned, friends truly duly worn
Fourth line Trixie: Strangers be, tried & treed accepted customs queezily
Fifth line stak: Gourge refused from gullet full, forced forth upon sidewalk
Sixth line Trixie: Walk Walk & keep on walking remember this when you talk.
There there now..................
Here's how it plays out without the play by play........
Lovelorn,forlorn British bitten goathead shearshorn
Hospice, forgotten, a piece torn for friendship born
Bread broken, carriage upturned, friends truly duly worn
Strangers be, tried & treed accepted customs queezily
Gourge refused from gullet full, forced forth upon sidewalk
Walk Walk & keep on walking remember this when you talk.
There ya go.................rock it like you have some command of the English language...........make poems,yo..........
Stak
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The wordplay is pretty fun! Why not post this on Rhian's next Poetry Train?
If you checked out your Spaceghost post, you might find a draft pick for a truly retarded team of superheroes.
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