04 July 2007

STAK AND TRIXIE.............poetique.............



First line stak: Lovelorn,forlorn British bitten goathead shearshorn

Line two Trixie: Hospice, forgotten, a piece torn for friendship born

Third line stak: Bread broken, carriage upturned, friends truly duly worn

Fourth line Trixie: Strangers be, tried & treed accepted customs queezily

Fifth line stak: Gourge refused from gullet full, forced forth upon sidewalk

Sixth line Trixie: Walk Walk & keep on walking remember this when you talk.



There there now..................


Here's how it plays out without the play by play........

Lovelorn,forlorn British bitten goathead shearshorn
Hospice, forgotten, a piece torn for friendship born
Bread broken, carriage upturned, friends truly duly worn
Strangers be, tried & treed accepted customs queezily
Gourge refused from gullet full, forced forth upon sidewalk
Walk Walk & keep on walking remember this when you talk.

There ya go.................rock it like you have some command of the English language...........make poems,yo..........

Stak

1 comment:

Julia Phillips Smith said...

The wordplay is pretty fun! Why not post this on Rhian's next Poetry Train?

If you checked out your Spaceghost post, you might find a draft pick for a truly retarded team of superheroes.