TWILIGHT BLEEDS.........poetry train car number who knows........
Edges give way leaking dark into the light slowly,surely it's invaded enmeshed and blended transformed and remade a new creature exactly what i intend to do to you.
Hey, I don't have your contact info, and I don't know what our music writer does with her dang address files, but we're trying to get an invitation to the band for the Metro's Best party on Wed., Oct. 24. Can you gimmie a fax or snail mail address where I can send it? Or, preferably, BOTH?
hey stacey...i'll get that info to ya via your e-mail........
to everyone else.....i gotta thank you all for the kind words........i thought the body of this piece was pretty elementary.......any one of you could've written a similar set of words.........
but yeah...........the last line brings the menace,don't it........
12 comments:
gulp. runs screaming into the night.....
Scary stuff, but I am lovin' it!
I do so love the dark side.
dark is good,no?...........
That last line was awesome! Gave me chills-and a few ways you can read it too. Just great!
Superbly visual and creepy! Love it!
heh - so Stak-babe, you thought the guys on Nancy's dance post were hot, huh?
wasn't looking at the guys,chica.......
Glad you liked the dancers...
I like the poem. Dark and creepy. Actually, the more I read the more I wish I wrote if for the dancers. Hmmm...another new way to look at them.
This is the sort of thing Linkin Park wishes they could write. Beautifully done, Stak!!!
Hey, I don't have your contact info, and I don't know what our music writer does with her dang address files, but we're trying to get an invitation to the band for the Metro's Best party on Wed., Oct. 24. Can you gimmie a fax or snail mail address where I can send it? Or, preferably, BOTH?
Thanks, babe!
hey stacey...i'll get that info to ya via your e-mail........
to everyone else.....i gotta thank you all for the kind words........i thought the body of this piece was pretty elementary.......any one of you could've written a similar set of words.........
but yeah...........the last line brings the menace,don't it........
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