Blurb #1
She smelled like nicotine
Stained fingers
Stained teeth
Stained soul
Blurb #2
Your words caress my teeth
I crunch them in my mouth
The syllables are sweet
The curses they are foul
Stak
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9 comments:
yep, make me feel just like an idiot for smoking
Wow - both of them are amazing. The last line of Blurb #1 - "Stained soul" - really packs a punch.
And Blurb #2's "Your words caress my teeth
I crunch them in my mouth" are fantastic.
I love both! Awesome!
You pack a lot of power in two small pieces! Awesome, Stak!
Liked the first one better. Hell of a punch to it.
Hope to see more of your work around the train.
I think I'm gonna stay away from that girl!!
I cannot really decide which one I prefer, that mean they are both good!!
I like them both, but I have to admit to a fondness for the crunchy words.
The crunchy words are Hetfield-esque. Gorgeous image, there.
I like that you say so much in few words, Stak. Leaves me wanting... well, more!
wow y'all.........just wow.........thank you...........
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